Category: Writers Block
Michael's Night
At the prodding of my friends, I am writing this story. My name is Mildred Hondorf. I am a former elementary school music teacher from Des Moines , Iowa
. I've always supplemented my income by teaching piano lessons - something I've done for over 30 years. Over the years I found that children have many
levels of musical ability. I've never had the pleasure of having a prodigy though I have taught some talented students. However I've also had my share
of what I call 'musically challenged' pupils.
One such student was Michael. Michael was 11 years old when his mother (a single Mom) dropped him off for his first piano lesson. I prefer that students
(especially boys) begin at an earlier age, which I explained to Michael. But Michael said that it had always been his mother's dream to hear him play
the piano.
So I took him as a student. Well, Michael began with his piano lessons and from the beginning I thought it was a hopeless endeavor. As much as Michael
tried, he lacked the sense of tone and basic rhythm needed to excel. But he dutifully reviewed his scales and some elementary pieces that I require all
my students to learn.
Over the months he tried and tried while I listened and cringed and tried to encourage him. At the end of each weekly lesson he'd always say, "My mom's
going to hear me play someday."
But it seemed hopeless. He just did not have any inborn ability. I only knew his mother from a distance as she dropped Michael off or waited in her aged
car to pick him up. She always waved and smiled but never stopped in.
Then one day Michael stopped coming to our lessons. I thought about calling him but assumed because of his lack of ability, that he had decided to pursue
something else. I also was glad that he stopped coming -- he was a bad advertisement for my teaching!
Several weeks later I mailed to the student's homes a flyer on the upcoming recital. To my surprise Michael (who received a flyer) asked me if he could
be in the recital.
I told him that the recital was for current pupils and because he had dropped out he really did not qualify.
He said that his mother had been sick and unable to take him to piano lessons but he was still practicing. "Miss Hondorf, I've just got to play!" he insisted.
I don't know what led me to allow him to play in the recital. Maybe it was his persistence or maybe it was something inside of me saying that it would
be all right.
The night for the recital came. The high school gymnasium was packed with parents, friends and relatives.
I put Michael up last in the program before I was to come up and thank all the students and play a finishing piece. I thought that any damage he would
do would come at the end of the program and I could always salvage his poor performance through my 'curtain closer'.
Well, the recital went off without a hitch. The students had been practicing and it showed. Then Michael came up on stage. His clothes were wrinkled
and his hair looked like he'd run an eggbeater through it. "Why didn't he dress up like the other students?" I thought. "Why didn't his mother at least
make him comb his hair for this special night?"
Michael pulled out the piano bench and he began. I was surprised when he announced that he had chosen Mozart's Concerto #21 in C Major.
I was not prepared for what I heard next.
His fingers were light on the keys, they even danced nimbly on the ivories. He went from pianissimo to fortissimo. From allegro to virtuoso. His suspended
chords that Mozart demands were magnificent! Never had I heard Mozart played so well by a person his age.
After six and a half minutes he ended in a grand crescendo and everyone was on their feet in wild applause.
Overcome and in tears I ran up on stage and put my arms around Michael in joy. "I've never heard you play like that Michael! How'd you do it?"
Through the microphone Michael explained: "Well Miss Hondorf, remember I told you my Mom was sick? Well, actually she had cancer and passed away this morning
and well... She was born deaf so tonight was the first time she ever heard me play. I wanted to make it special."
There wasn't a dry eye in the house that evening.
As the people from Social Services led Michael from the stage to be placed into foster care, I noticed that even their eyes were red and puffy, and I thought
to myself how much richer my life had been for taking Michael as my pupil.
No, I've never had a prodigy but that night I became a prodigy -- of Michael's! He was the teacher and I was the pupil for it is he that taught me the
meaning of perseverance and love and believing in yourself and maybe even taking a chance in someone and you don't know why.
Beautiful story! The ending was very predictable, but touching nonetheless. The fact that Michael looked dissheveled but performed so beautifully stands out to me for some strange reason.
Ver touching story. like raven said, the ending was a little predictable, but what emotional story like this isn't predictable? I do have to admit, I thaught michael was the one that had died at first, but then it turned out to be his mother.
I do know a few people who have had tragic things happen to them, and they do let the emotion of it fuel their music. It causes some of the most beautiful music I've ever heard.
I would have to agree with the above posters on this one. Very nice. very personal and well-written. Keep up the good work.
I like this story as well. it's these touching stories that really sometimes give you a thought provoker and make you sit and think.
Jess